tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3452206432269855060.post2366050358339501116..comments2023-05-20T04:04:49.138-04:00Comments on From the world of Helena Malheur: Love Song's SerenadeHelena Malheurhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12306591221090287590noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3452206432269855060.post-59119918569019450912010-12-09T12:39:22.659-05:002010-12-09T12:39:22.659-05:00beautiful music.
thanks for sharing...
Award/...beautiful music.<br />thanks for sharing...<br /><br /> <a href="http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/12/08/there-are-lots-of-visions-in-me-4-potluck-week-13/" rel="nofollow">Award/Treats 4 Poetic Friends of Jingle, Happy Thursday!</a><br /><br />hope to see you on week 14.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3452206432269855060.post-80914501216049053432010-12-08T22:53:23.631-05:002010-12-08T22:53:23.631-05:00smiles...and i hope that it is more than a song......smiles...and i hope that it is more than a song...smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3452206432269855060.post-15609997464378174082010-12-08T00:54:59.904-05:002010-12-08T00:54:59.904-05:00It is not difficult for many to relate to these fe...It is not difficult for many to relate to these feelings and thats why it becomes difficult for a writer to convey these honestly. I think you have done a fabulous job. Thank You for the poem.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3452206432269855060.post-35943788315220100572010-12-07T16:55:44.852-05:002010-12-07T16:55:44.852-05:00This was lovely. I read it and when I finished, I ...This was lovely. I read it and when I finished, I sighed...TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3452206432269855060.post-87264872019583499152010-12-07T14:45:24.453-05:002010-12-07T14:45:24.453-05:00So beautiful, dreams so sweet! Thanks for sharing!...So beautiful, dreams so sweet! Thanks for sharing! The image is great!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3452206432269855060.post-69281043603341072302010-12-07T14:00:42.636-05:002010-12-07T14:00:42.636-05:00Helena a beautiful and romantic piece.
PamelaHelena a beautiful and romantic piece.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3452206432269855060.post-42863416173248375012010-12-07T13:15:39.862-05:002010-12-07T13:15:39.862-05:00Delightful piece. A romantic, upbeat vision - such...Delightful piece. A romantic, upbeat vision - such a dream, such delight. Strong imagery and word choice, really emphasizes the beauty of the work. All the places one can go...and never leave their room.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3452206432269855060.post-74579463362107716922010-12-07T09:54:52.088-05:002010-12-07T09:54:52.088-05:00Lovely :) "all while never having left this r...Lovely :) "all while never having left this room".<br />It ends great as well!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3452206432269855060.post-53419418864728446542010-12-07T07:47:11.048-05:002010-12-07T07:47:11.048-05:00oh my goodness!! i LOVE this....gorgeous, gorgeous...oh my goodness!! i LOVE this....gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous...<br /><br />must go read it over and over again!!<br /><br />:)melhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00336474101204142611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3452206432269855060.post-33552482937006363842010-12-07T02:44:01.369-05:002010-12-07T02:44:01.369-05:00Hey Victoria -- Yes!! That is my thought exactly -...Hey Victoria -- Yes!! That is my thought exactly -- and I guess you can call me “Bonheur” now… I’ve been writing a lot of light pieces recently! ;)Helena Malheurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12306591221090287590noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3452206432269855060.post-54839662959769603562010-12-06T20:02:07.389-05:002010-12-06T20:02:07.389-05:00Helena, just know that I welcome critique as well....Helena, just know that I welcome critique as well. It helps us grow as poets, don't you think?<br />Victoria (liv2write2day)BTW, I think you are Helena Bonheur. :0)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3452206432269855060.post-14051202652924956932010-12-06T17:39:50.965-05:002010-12-06T17:39:50.965-05:00Imagination makes the world go round especially wh...Imagination makes the world go round especially when love is tied up for a bit.. ..smiles..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3452206432269855060.post-48496156800833274022010-12-06T16:54:25.046-05:002010-12-06T16:54:25.046-05:00This definitely feels like being in love..no mista...This definitely feels like being in love..no mistaking that feeling...well done!Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3452206432269855060.post-25749657966508264362010-12-06T15:36:55.440-05:002010-12-06T15:36:55.440-05:00smart piece.
love the tour your words give.
keep s...smart piece.<br />love the tour your words give.<br />keep smiling<br />Welcome to JP!<br /><br />A+Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3452206432269855060.post-88053795161353081962010-12-06T14:46:40.071-05:002010-12-06T14:46:40.071-05:00Tthank you everyone for the comments!
Liv
I app...Tthank you everyone for the comments! <br /><br />Liv <br />I appreciate your insightful comment and constructive criticism. I was debating about the line breaks myself and have changed them a few times. It might have been better the way it was before... longer lines. And I actually like the "I've"s myself. Thought it gave it a lyrical quality -- I like repetition sometimes. <br /><br />Thank you very much for your candid comment; after all, that is the reason I have this blog -- to improve my writing.Helena Malheurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12306591221090287590noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3452206432269855060.post-23539837653777467382010-12-06T12:33:57.248-05:002010-12-06T12:33:57.248-05:00I love the premise of this poem and beautifully pe...I love the premise of this poem and beautifully penned words. I'm not sure about the line breaks. I think the repetition of "I've" is good but my first reaction was to question them leading off each line. I'm afraid to say it doesn't work because it does. It's just something to think about. I enjoy your work, Helena.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3452206432269855060.post-60646819700556368212010-12-06T11:42:36.435-05:002010-12-06T11:42:36.435-05:00ah the dream lover, seems to be making the rounds ...ah the dream lover, seems to be making the rounds ...brilliantAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3452206432269855060.post-11830163616253460612010-12-06T10:59:37.371-05:002010-12-06T10:59:37.371-05:00love makes words come alive! here's mine- http...love makes words come alive! here's mine- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/01/15/head/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3452206432269855060.post-9397877189652826412010-12-06T08:32:22.263-05:002010-12-06T08:32:22.263-05:00What a lovely love poem!What a lovely love poem!Strummed Wordshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14345074413602549369noreply@blogger.com