tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3452206432269855060.post6970838955831354659..comments2023-05-20T04:04:49.138-04:00Comments on From the world of Helena Malheur: In loveHelena Malheurhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12306591221090287590noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3452206432269855060.post-44539906753810373832010-12-05T22:19:25.412-05:002010-12-05T22:19:25.412-05:00described it beautifully. Love Doorways although b...described it beautifully. Love Doorways although both are lovely!<br />thank you<br /><br />thank you for your visit and commentHopehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07423174840229628807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3452206432269855060.post-51861570062441839292010-12-05T20:38:48.259-05:002010-12-05T20:38:48.259-05:00Like your cinquains indeed
thanks Helena for lett...Like your cinquains indeed<br /><br />thanks Helena for letting us enjoy your beauty in words<br /><br />Moonie hugsmoondustwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3452206432269855060.post-74225600513675415992010-12-05T19:38:10.153-05:002010-12-05T19:38:10.153-05:00I do so like cinquains...can express so much in so...I do so like cinquains...can express so much in so few words. Really makes you think for every word you're putting out there. You've utilized them well, and given us a lovely expression.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3452206432269855060.post-89842816128380322592010-12-05T18:03:10.623-05:002010-12-05T18:03:10.623-05:00Both of those poems work for the photo - and by th...Both of those poems work for the photo - and by themselves. Well done.Glynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10802111972232088511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3452206432269855060.post-13769026752527090222010-12-05T16:28:23.497-05:002010-12-05T16:28:23.497-05:00Short forms are challenging, but I enjoyed both of...Short forms are challenging, but I enjoyed both of your cinquains. "Steal hearts and air"...I'm lovin that!Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3452206432269855060.post-56501725227538685112010-12-05T13:24:05.523-05:002010-12-05T13:24:05.523-05:00Beautifully said in few words. It is difficult to...Beautifully said in few words. It is difficult to do, you have done it well.<br /><br />WysteriaWysteriahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04249516708737350017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3452206432269855060.post-53077409641792061452010-12-05T13:01:39.474-05:002010-12-05T13:01:39.474-05:00Well executed works both. I liked your formal appr...Well executed works both. I liked your formal approach with the emotional subject.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3452206432269855060.post-9458144668041936472010-12-05T12:55:22.501-05:002010-12-05T12:55:22.501-05:00Doorways I think I liked better by comparison. Coo...Doorways I think I liked better by comparison. Cool diamante (I think). Here's mine http://thelunaticsdiary.blogspot.com/2010/12/dreams-are-never-eternal.htmlbatsickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15019758024683486338noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3452206432269855060.post-3990202080375023162010-12-05T12:40:16.766-05:002010-12-05T12:40:16.766-05:00I don't know which poem I like best -- they ar...I don't know which poem I like best -- they are both beautiful.<br /><br />Terse. Sparse and lovely.Louise Gallagherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13522775693728655487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3452206432269855060.post-7813481654950365052010-12-05T12:04:45.909-05:002010-12-05T12:04:45.909-05:00Both poems equally fit this photograph! Gorgeous w...Both poems equally fit this photograph! Gorgeous writing! ~ :)AprilAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3452206432269855060.post-34263354617028936082010-12-05T11:30:50.357-05:002010-12-05T11:30:50.357-05:00i love that you start with "his mouth" a...i love that you start with "his mouth" and let it stand alone for a moment in this first line...gives a very oral feeling to your wordsClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3452206432269855060.post-52095923584691750472010-12-05T11:28:03.299-05:002010-12-05T11:28:03.299-05:00Thanks everyone! I appreciate your comments very m...Thanks everyone! I appreciate your comments very much. :)Helena Malheurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12306591221090287590noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3452206432269855060.post-16526178048792368072010-12-05T11:09:24.278-05:002010-12-05T11:09:24.278-05:00i love it..Helena..your simple words reach the dee...i love it..Helena..your simple words reach the deepest emotions, great one here!Desert Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17370899545012572162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3452206432269855060.post-4903418782835863712010-12-05T10:59:40.238-05:002010-12-05T10:59:40.238-05:00a picture is worth a thousands words...not true in...a picture is worth a thousands words...not true in this case. tight write. In love with this one.Jerryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04874006676004790578noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3452206432269855060.post-66554283495644420482010-12-05T10:56:19.245-05:002010-12-05T10:56:19.245-05:00A wonderful expression of `In Love`
Anita.A wonderful expression of `In Love`<br /><br />Anita.Anita Magdalenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17759774477028333590noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3452206432269855060.post-64018870972978807852010-12-05T10:39:34.655-05:002010-12-05T10:39:34.655-05:00Nicely done! lover of doorways...Nicely done! lover of doorways...Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3452206432269855060.post-62977036379318246562010-12-05T10:38:34.685-05:002010-12-05T10:38:34.685-05:00so few and yet so much - grear write!so few and yet so much - grear write!Another Man's Dreamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04453440630317550594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3452206432269855060.post-52366344317200395932010-12-05T10:33:54.713-05:002010-12-05T10:33:54.713-05:00Well done! Especially like the lines that rhyme sh...Well done! Especially like the lines that rhyme shivers/quivers. Nice use of the cinquain. Cheersdustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3452206432269855060.post-90440641419130754212010-12-05T10:04:22.154-05:002010-12-05T10:04:22.154-05:00In love, few words with defined meaning, a very go...In love, few words with defined meaning, a very good writeKodjo Deynoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01299996598769756878noreply@blogger.com